Feedback 1 - Pauline
Pauline, your blog website was well designed with a capturing layout and introduction. I found your reflection on the impact of technology on education and on us, very engaging and a true critical reflection. You evaluated many main points with accurate and direct reference to set readings from our unit. You have compared many valuable insights from reputable sources. Your description and feelings were
However, I found your evaluation examined too many variables and I became confused with so many perspectives, negative and positive. The conclusion and future action plan was a great use of planning and reflection for future insights.
Overall, you used effective thinking and planning and accurate use of Gibbs reflective cycle. The headings helped with clarity and highlighted the key insights and information which made your whole reflection clear and effective for readers. Thank you for sharing your reflection piece.
Feedback 2 - Theresa
Theresa, your blog website was well designed with an authentic layout and personal introduction. I found your reflection of the driving question, “is it sustainable that we continue on our current path of technological develop?” engaging and informative. Your description used a capturing personal perspective that enhanced reading and engagement. The sentence in section 2 “how I rarely pause to question what underpins that convenience, particularly in relation to dependence, privacy and professional responsibility”. Displays your feelings are genuine and an accurate representation of your personal experience and journey with digital technologies through a range of in-depth perspectives. Use and incorporation of unit readings to inform your evaluation may enhance your viewpoint in this section. Your Analysis was professional and well academically written. You have compared and contrasted many valuable insights and from personal experiences and some reputable sources. Your overall conclusion and future action plan was a great use of planning and reflection for future insights.
Overall, you used effective thinking and planning and accurate use of Gibbs reflective cycle. The headings helped with clarity and highlighted the key insights and information which made your reflection clear and effective for readers.